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		<title>By: Five Part Series: Writing Lessons From Stargate SG-1 &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Writer&#39;s Round-About - The Craft and Business of Fiction and Freelance Writing</title>
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		<dc:creator>Five Part Series: Writing Lessons From Stargate SG-1 &#187; Blog Archive &#187; Writer&#39;s Round-About - The Craft and Business of Fiction and Freelance Writing</dc:creator>
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		<description>[...] Part Five: Formula &#8211; Making A Success Key Mould The most successful t.v. series follow a very specific formula, so do many writers. What keeps this formula fresh and interesting? How can we make a mould of our own successes so we can replicate them in the future? [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Part Five: Formula &#8211; Making A Success Key Mould The most successful t.v. series follow a very specific formula, so do many writers. What keeps this formula fresh and interesting? How can we make a mould of our own successes so we can replicate them in the future? [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Rebecca Laffar-Smith</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rebecca Laffar-Smith</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 27 Jan 2010 00:48:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>One of the things that makes Stargate particularly fun for writer&#039;s is that there are many occasions where the shows writers talk directly to the audience through plot or character dialogue. These little &quot;inside jokes&quot; lighten the moment and are one of the reasons I love watching with my writer&#039;s cap on.

I appreciate the conversational aspect of your &quot;strong opinions&quot;, W. Knox. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, especially during such a busy month.

I hope you enjoyed your Nanowrimo experience.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One of the things that makes Stargate particularly fun for writer&#8217;s is that there are many occasions where the shows writers talk directly to the audience through plot or character dialogue. These little &#8220;inside jokes&#8221; lighten the moment and are one of the reasons I love watching with my writer&#8217;s cap on.</p>
<p>I appreciate the conversational aspect of your &#8220;strong opinions&#8221;, W. Knox. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, especially during such a busy month.</p>
<p>I hope you enjoyed your Nanowrimo experience.</p>
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		<title>By: W. Knox Richardson</title>
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		<dc:creator>W. Knox Richardson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 16 Nov 2009 00:38:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I was just watching an SG1 episode and noted in one scene where Gen. Landry (successor to Gen. &quot;Two Ls&quot; O&#039;Neill) first meets LTC Mitchell.  Landry asks Mitchell, &quot;Well, what&#039;s your (character) flaw?  Everyone has one.&quot;  Here I think the writers here are talking to other writers.

The lessons I learned from SGI, et al, are not just for writing SCIFI.   &quot;Indeed,&quot; as Teal&#039;q might say, the techniques shown on screen can be used with any fiction that follows mythic hero story arcs -- 90 percent of popular adventure fiction.  You don&#039;t need to be a SCIFI  fan to appreciate SG1.  The close cooperation of the very well-grounded USAF in the production and the public reception of actress Amanda Tapping in the role of a strong, secure modern female reveals the broad appeal (perhaps like Linda Hamilton in &quot;Terminator.&quot;).  The series may be more popular now than during production, perhaps the Star Trek Effect.  And while others may pan SGU (and it does have flaws -- we need water, we need air, we need batteries, we need light bulbs, and nobody loves us ) the serial appeal and painfully necessary character development will help. Otherwise it is just &quot;Lost in Space&quot; with unscheduled wormhole activations.

(Sorry for my strong opinions but it is my Nano talking.  I am in character and need to stay there for the remainder of a big scene.  I should get to 25K today.  I fell back 800 words yesterday.  I have plenty to write about but the burnout monster in hiding in my closet -- smoking fine cigars and watching football.)

Again, thanks.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I was just watching an SG1 episode and noted in one scene where Gen. Landry (successor to Gen. &#8220;Two Ls&#8221; O&#8217;Neill) first meets LTC Mitchell.  Landry asks Mitchell, &#8220;Well, what&#8217;s your (character) flaw?  Everyone has one.&#8221;  Here I think the writers here are talking to other writers.</p>
<p>The lessons I learned from SGI, et al, are not just for writing SCIFI.   &#8220;Indeed,&#8221; as Teal&#8217;q might say, the techniques shown on screen can be used with any fiction that follows mythic hero story arcs &#8212; 90 percent of popular adventure fiction.  You don&#8217;t need to be a SCIFI  fan to appreciate SG1.  The close cooperation of the very well-grounded USAF in the production and the public reception of actress Amanda Tapping in the role of a strong, secure modern female reveals the broad appeal (perhaps like Linda Hamilton in &#8220;Terminator.&#8221;).  The series may be more popular now than during production, perhaps the Star Trek Effect.  And while others may pan SGU (and it does have flaws &#8212; we need water, we need air, we need batteries, we need light bulbs, and nobody loves us ) the serial appeal and painfully necessary character development will help. Otherwise it is just &#8220;Lost in Space&#8221; with unscheduled wormhole activations.</p>
<p>(Sorry for my strong opinions but it is my Nano talking.  I am in character and need to stay there for the remainder of a big scene.  I should get to 25K today.  I fell back 800 words yesterday.  I have plenty to write about but the burnout monster in hiding in my closet &#8212; smoking fine cigars and watching football.)</p>
<p>Again, thanks.</p>
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		<title>By: Rebecca Laffar-Smith</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rebecca Laffar-Smith</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 15 Nov 2009 00:35:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ve actually been thinking recently of writing a couple of follow-up posts regarding some of the TV series that were released this season. For example, while Stargate Universe doesn&#039;t seem to follow the same formula of Stargate&#039;s earlier success there is a very strong continuity from one episode to the next. It is, again, the kind of series one really needs to watch from the beginning to truly enjoy. It develops character and is very character-based, so far, and, as a writer I&#039;ve been very curious to watch the storyline develop.

Another such series is Flash Forward and there are some brilliant writing techniques at work in this new series. Foreshadowing plays a significant role with aspects of the plot leaking through to viewers piece by piece. Each week ends in a twist, an aspect that transforms our perspective to some degree, leaving one wondering how the story will evolve. As a writer, I wonder how they will close out the season. It feels like the plot must have been completely scripted before production began and I wonder if that means there could only ever be a single season. After all, at some point they&#039;ll solve the mystery, then what?

I think one of the reasons Fan Fiction is so popular is because readers and writers ache to have more story after the fact. As writers, we understand that there is a point you begin, and a point you end. You tell the story that comes between those points but even that is only a part of the fuller story. What comes before and after is left to the imagination. Some writers will delve into it with prequels and sequels but it is impossible to tell ALL of a story, even if you cover a lifetime we wonder about the lives that were touched in that lifetime. The story is never fully told and the opportunity to explore that potential is why Fan Fiction continues to flourish.

I hope you&#039;re enjoying your Nano adventure.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve actually been thinking recently of writing a couple of follow-up posts regarding some of the TV series that were released this season. For example, while Stargate Universe doesn&#8217;t seem to follow the same formula of Stargate&#8217;s earlier success there is a very strong continuity from one episode to the next. It is, again, the kind of series one really needs to watch from the beginning to truly enjoy. It develops character and is very character-based, so far, and, as a writer I&#8217;ve been very curious to watch the storyline develop.</p>
<p>Another such series is Flash Forward and there are some brilliant writing techniques at work in this new series. Foreshadowing plays a significant role with aspects of the plot leaking through to viewers piece by piece. Each week ends in a twist, an aspect that transforms our perspective to some degree, leaving one wondering how the story will evolve. As a writer, I wonder how they will close out the season. It feels like the plot must have been completely scripted before production began and I wonder if that means there could only ever be a single season. After all, at some point they&#8217;ll solve the mystery, then what?</p>
<p>I think one of the reasons Fan Fiction is so popular is because readers and writers ache to have more story after the fact. As writers, we understand that there is a point you begin, and a point you end. You tell the story that comes between those points but even that is only a part of the fuller story. What comes before and after is left to the imagination. Some writers will delve into it with prequels and sequels but it is impossible to tell ALL of a story, even if you cover a lifetime we wonder about the lives that were touched in that lifetime. The story is never fully told and the opportunity to explore that potential is why Fan Fiction continues to flourish.</p>
<p>I hope you&#8217;re enjoying your Nano adventure.</p>
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		<title>By: W. Knox Richardson</title>
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		<dc:creator>W. Knox Richardson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Nov 2009 00:32:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for your thoughtful response.

Just an addendum:  As you note SG1 and SGA evolved into a serial approach from free-standing episodes, so it can be hard to follow for new viewers.  It may be worth mentioning to your follows that SG1 Seasons 1-8 are available for free, legally, via HULU.com through April of next year. Writers and others can watch nearly the entire series sequentially whenever they want.   I think someone could design a course in TV writing using SG1 as the textbook.

I personally lost interest in SG1 about its fourth season when I couldn&#039;t follow the storyline after missing some episodes.  It seemed to me then to be stylized reproduction of &quot;COMBAT,&quot; the 1960s ABC-TV  WWII series, where a small foot patrol, led by a fearless if not indignant leader, undertook weekly missions behind enemy line to secure intelligence or save the French maiden, with the Germans playing the part of the Goa&#039;uld.   That was before the X303.

Watching the series in its entirety is a truly satisfying experience for critical viewers looking to see mythic stories (in our own time) with classic heroes. Plus all the back stories get played out.  That is writer&#039;s dream job.

Again, thanks, and now back to wrimo.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for your thoughtful response.</p>
<p>Just an addendum:  As you note SG1 and SGA evolved into a serial approach from free-standing episodes, so it can be hard to follow for new viewers.  It may be worth mentioning to your follows that SG1 Seasons 1-8 are available for free, legally, via HULU.com through April of next year. Writers and others can watch nearly the entire series sequentially whenever they want.   I think someone could design a course in TV writing using SG1 as the textbook.</p>
<p>I personally lost interest in SG1 about its fourth season when I couldn&#8217;t follow the storyline after missing some episodes.  It seemed to me then to be stylized reproduction of &#8220;COMBAT,&#8221; the 1960s ABC-TV  WWII series, where a small foot patrol, led by a fearless if not indignant leader, undertook weekly missions behind enemy line to secure intelligence or save the French maiden, with the Germans playing the part of the Goa&#8217;uld.   That was before the X303.</p>
<p>Watching the series in its entirety is a truly satisfying experience for critical viewers looking to see mythic stories (in our own time) with classic heroes. Plus all the back stories get played out.  That is writer&#8217;s dream job.</p>
<p>Again, thanks, and now back to wrimo.</p>
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		<title>By: Rebecca Laffar-Smith</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rebecca Laffar-Smith</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 04 Nov 2009 00:29:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m glad you enjoyed the Lessons from Stargate series for writers. SG1 and SGA DEFINITELY used formulaic writing. I think part of what disappoints me about the new Stargate Universe is that they&#039;ve deviated from the old formula. Each week I keep hoping it will return to the good, solid, and familiar formula that worked so well with the other Stargate series. I guess that is one downside of formulaic writing, regular readers grow accustomed and have certain expectations for the future.

Quite a lot of writing follows specific formula. The majority of the romance industry, for example, are tied to the formulaic requirements. Part of Stephen King&#039;s success is due to his personal formula which many horror writers try to emulate. Other science fiction television series, such as Star Trek, Sliders, and Andromeda have base formulas that are used in the construction of each episode. When working with several writers a formula can be vital to maintaining a consistency that keep readers entertained.

Good luck with your NaNo!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m glad you enjoyed the Lessons from Stargate series for writers. SG1 and SGA DEFINITELY used formulaic writing. I think part of what disappoints me about the new Stargate Universe is that they&#8217;ve deviated from the old formula. Each week I keep hoping it will return to the good, solid, and familiar formula that worked so well with the other Stargate series. I guess that is one downside of formulaic writing, regular readers grow accustomed and have certain expectations for the future.</p>
<p>Quite a lot of writing follows specific formula. The majority of the romance industry, for example, are tied to the formulaic requirements. Part of Stephen King&#8217;s success is due to his personal formula which many horror writers try to emulate. Other science fiction television series, such as Star Trek, Sliders, and Andromeda have base formulas that are used in the construction of each episode. When working with several writers a formula can be vital to maintaining a consistency that keep readers entertained.</p>
<p>Good luck with your NaNo!</p>
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		<title>By: W. Knox Richardson</title>
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		<dc:creator>W. Knox Richardson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 04 Nov 2009 00:26:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Just stumbled across your site on a Google search for anything regarding writing for the Stargate series.  I had independently come to the conclusion that their writing was an absolute model of classic-modern storytelling, and they even acknowledged their method through helpful tips and hints to other writers embedded in dialogue.  I am convinced of it.  I&#039;m doing a NaNo at the moment so just thanks for the articles on Stargate writing.  For me, it&#039;s like figuring out directions from watching the sun and then coming across a road map staked to a big sign: you are here.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just stumbled across your site on a Google search for anything regarding writing for the Stargate series.  I had independently come to the conclusion that their writing was an absolute model of classic-modern storytelling, and they even acknowledged their method through helpful tips and hints to other writers embedded in dialogue.  I am convinced of it.  I&#8217;m doing a NaNo at the moment so just thanks for the articles on Stargate writing.  For me, it&#8217;s like figuring out directions from watching the sun and then coming across a road map staked to a big sign: you are here.</p>
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		<title>By: Rebecca Laffar-Smith</title>
		<link>http://www.writersroundabout.com/2007/12/sg1-series-part-five-formula-%e2%80%93-making-a-success-key-mould.html#comment-280</link>
		<dc:creator>Rebecca Laffar-Smith</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 28 Dec 2007 00:37:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m glad it reached you, Michele. I love to write in the darkness too. The hum of my PC is the only sound to keep the tapping keys company. Alas, I don&#039;t get to write as late as I&#039;d like because my little ones demand me alert and functional the next morning.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m glad it reached you, Michele. I love to write in the darkness too. The hum of my PC is the only sound to keep the tapping keys company. Alas, I don&#8217;t get to write as late as I&#8217;d like because my little ones demand me alert and functional the next morning.</p>
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		<title>By: Michele</title>
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		<dc:creator>Michele</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 24 Dec 2007 05:18:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>When you can hear other’s voices you’ll begin to hear your own whispering in the darkness.

I love this sentence you wrote! It particularly stood out to me, spoke to me... I guess it&#039;s because I love writing in the still of the night :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>When you can hear other’s voices you’ll begin to hear your own whispering in the darkness.</p>
<p>I love this sentence you wrote! It particularly stood out to me, spoke to me&#8230; I guess it&#8217;s because I love writing in the still of the night <img src='http://www.writersroundabout.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Rebecca Laffar-Smith</title>
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		<dc:creator>Rebecca Laffar-Smith</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 17 Dec 2007 12:42:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, Branwyn! It&#039;s great to hear from your beautiful voice! Sometimes it can be very difficult to quiet the characters excitement. It&#039;s so much more fun to have a party with them instead. :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Branwyn! It&#8217;s great to hear from your beautiful voice! Sometimes it can be very difficult to quiet the characters excitement. It&#8217;s so much more fun to have a party with them instead. <img src='http://www.writersroundabout.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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